I long for that small space
A space I had created
For myself,
It was my own
A place where I felt loved
A place called I home,
It wasn’t much
The others would say
And I would shrug,
So much happiness
So many memories
It possessed it all,
I miss my home
As I am miles away
And emptiness fills that space.
This week’s Poetry 101 Rehab prompt is HOME.
This post is a part of Poetry 101 Rehab (Mara Eastern).
Ruminations of a Raven 
Oh, that’s quite a heartbreaking poem about homesickness… I can hear you. Thank you very much for joining in the challenge and sharing your lovely poem!
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Thank you so much for the feedback. This prompt really brought back some painful memories. I am so glad I could partake in this awesome challenge.
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Its a lovely Poem Aaliya. The feeling of homesikeness.. can understand…painful indeed.
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Thanks!
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Your words are echoing in my ears… they are screaming : Home! Home! Home!
You did more than just great to express the emotions.
I can’t wait for your next one 🙂
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Thank you so much for your lovely comment. Please do read other poems as well. 🙂
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